Worship: Chapter 1 – The Invisible Girl

And G-d said, “Take now thy son, thine only son Isaac, whom thou lovest, and get thee into the land of Moriah; and offer him there for a burnt offering upon one of the mountains which I will tell thee of.” 

– Genesis 22:2

Beginnings are important.

While it is often said and accepted as fact one can begin again, it is a lie. A lie clad in white but a lie none the less. There is one beginning of a thing. There is one beginning of a person. There is one beginning of a story. And the beginning of a thing or a story or a person will determine its course – and its demise. The beginning of this thing and this person and this story were all the same: 32 years ago Abigail Upton was born.

Everyone is born into a different circumstance. Abigail, unfortunately, was born into invisibility.

She first was invisible to her parents. They are most certainly not important and will get only this one mention. They fed her, clothed her, packed her off to school and grandma’s, but they never saw her. She was a pet. Less than. Not worth a smile or a pat.

Abigail would never know when, years later, during the divorce, they had argued over her. Not who would get her, but who had to take her.

She was invisible in grade school. Long, unkept, mousy brown hair covered her thick glasses and dark eyes. Kickball meant “oh, yeah, I guess we’ll take her then” – last, until the pudgy kid with the club foot moved to town. She wasn’t shy, per se, but there were so many who could talk better, think better. She wore unaffecting clothes with an unaffecting attitude.


Once, in her fourth grade year, she tried to become visible. Her English teacher asked if anyone knew David from the Bible. Abigail had just read the story a week before. Now, she thought, was her chance. She knew all the details. She could share something she knew. Everyone would be impressed. They would see her.

“He was King Saul’s armor bearer and…”

She was interrupted by her teacher’s laughter “No, Abby, David was the King and he slew the giant Goliath.” Abigail knew this, of course, and would have added the part about Goliath if she hadn’t been interrupted, but now she was squashed back in fear.

Everyone was looking at her. She looked at her desk, her hair making a little room, a barrier between her and The Others. Abigail willed back her tears.

Inside her mind, she huddled. Trying to be invisible again. Thinking thoughts she would never say, “No, ma’am, Saul was king when David slew Goliath.” At that moment she hated Mrs. Rose. She hated the other students. Most of all, she hated herself.

Of course nine year old Abigail couldn’t know her teacher was drunk and, in fact, had not been sober a day in the last 10 years. Abigail couldn’t know the Superintendent had left Mrs. Rose on for the last couple years as an act of mercy. Abigail just knew shame.

Abigail decided in that precise moment being invisible was better than this. Ever again.

High school was worse. There were boys. Girls were supposed to like boys. Girls were supposed to do things to be noticed by boys.

Abigail was never noticed. By anyone. Especially not boys. One would be wrong to think Abigail was made fun of. To be teased, someone has to see you. No one saw her. She floated down the halls of her school, head down, feet shuffling and no one noticed.

Abigail felt. Deeply. She read and became Lizzie Bennett, Nancy Drew. She was Anne of Green Gables – ambitious and competitive and smart. She had the wit and determination of Jo March.

She wanted everyone to know her, to see her. To see the bright, ambitious, determined girl she was inside. She had passion. She knew she could change the world.

If only.

She loved. Deeply. She hadn’t found “him” yet, or, more exactly, he hadn’t found her, but she knew when it happened she would give all her heart. He would see her as she saw herself. He would look beyond her exterior. He would see her, the real her.

At night, when her hormones raged, Abigail would touch herself and think of Him. She could feel his gentle touch, the love in his fingers as he caressed her. He would say to her the things she longed to hear. He would cherish her.

She waited, invisible, for him. The One who would see her.

It happened, or so Abigail thought, the final semester of her senior year. She was standing at her locker, collecting her books for class. The hustle of hundreds of students passed by behind.


At first, it didn’t register. She continued fiddling with her books for her first two classes.

He tapped her shoulder. “Abby?”

She turned. It was Mark Thompson. He was wearing his usual uniform: Wranglers, plaid flannel shirt, cowboy boots and a John Deer hat. Even with the boots, he was the same 5′ 6″ as Abigail.

Mark was a cruel young man. One of his happiest activities was to go out to his father’s barn and intentionally maim the feral cats with his .22 pistol. He found other’s misfortune amusing. Empathy was nowhere to be found in his short, stocky frame.

Of course Abigail didn’t know this. She didn’t really know Mark. They had Algebra together and all she really knew was he didn’t seem to be doing well with it. She did know he was a boy, and he was talking to her.

As soon as she met his gaze, she immediately looked down. Her voice was tight “hi.”

“Whatcha doin’?” He sounded nervous. Of course Abigail didn’t notice, she was mortified. She wanted to crawl into her locker.

“Just…getting my books.”

“Yeah, I gotta get to class too. I was wonderin’…would you like to go out Saturday? I could pick you up and we could go to that ‘Fallen’ movie. I heard it’s pretty good.”

“Oh, um, sorry, I have plans.” She turned on her heels and used a much quicker shuffle to take her to Social Studies. She heard him mutter “OK” behind her.

Abigail’s heart was racing. She was terrified. She was excited. She wanted to hide and she wanted to dance. A boy just asked her out. On a proper date.

Wait, thought Abigail, she had just turned him down. “What have I done? What if he, Mark, was Him? I have blown it. I and my insecurities and my fear and my anxiety have left me alone forever.”

She pushed back her tears as she slid into her desk.


32 Comments on “Worship: Chapter 1 – The Invisible Girl”

  1. […] fiction, but seem to do it sporadically these days. I have two novels started: Resurrection and Worship. I even write the occasional micro story, like The Incident or She […]


  2. Reblogged this on Fictional Kevin and commented:

    This is a piece I started a while ago. I am going to be writing another chapter this week. Let me know your feedback. Also, if you would like to be a “beta reader” and give me pre-publish input, comment below and I’ll send you a draft to eviscerate.


  3. I’m fascinated and I’d love to be a beta reader. I’m so proud, feel like I should take credit cause I just about raised you and Meg cause mom was so busy and all. Wish you’d ditch the cigars, tho

    Liked by 1 person

  4. A very engaging beginning chapter, looking forward to the next.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. You know I want the rest of it, right?

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Elizabeth Helmich says:

    I love and hate this, which means you’ve done a great job. This picture you’ve drawn of Abby is so complete I feel compelled to reach in and snatch her – straight out of your story. I will be back to see her fate.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Nena says:

    You got my attention for sure! I used to feel invisible when I was younger especially after my parent’s divorce so I am looking forward to reading more about Abby;)

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Deb says:

    I want more! A lot more!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. […] This is the second chapter. To read the first and see what makes Abigail the person she is – and some distressing insight into Mark, go here. […]


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